Hello, I read this update by update since the beginning and looked forwards to it each week.
I really loved the banter and growth between KC and AM. There were moments that I laughed and moments of suspense where I started reading faster to find out what happened. Each of the cliffhangers between updates really hit.
It is apparent at the start that the two are opposites, but I found it interesting how their opinions on luck, optimism, and aliens differed in ways I didn’t expect.
I really enjoy conversation based stories, and this one really scratches that itch. Also the little sketch feature was a fun detail.
I read the first update on desktop, but I read the rest on mobile and it seemed to work fine unless there was something I unknowingly missed.
If I were to summarize my feelings at the end, it would be that meme picture of the cat looking at the phone with tear filled eyes. In all, Bow/Arrow was a delight to read, thanks for making it!
Thanks so much for reading and for your comment! :) I'm glad it was still readable on mobile. My main concern with that was that I used a silly method to make the "AM:" and "KC:" tags on each message be smaller than the message text, which didn't scale the way I wanted on mobile. Not in a way that BROKE anything per se, I just didn't like the look of it.
Thanks for sticking with the story from beginning to end ~
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wowowowow this was so cool and good thank you for making it!!!
Thanks so much for reading!
this was so atmospheric and cool... I loved the ambiguous ending too!!!
Thank you!! I'm really glad the ending landed.
Hello, I read this update by update since the beginning and looked forwards to it each week.
I really loved the banter and growth between KC and AM. There were moments that I laughed and moments of suspense where I started reading faster to find out what happened. Each of the cliffhangers between updates really hit.
It is apparent at the start that the two are opposites, but I found it interesting how their opinions on luck, optimism, and aliens differed in ways I didn’t expect.
I really enjoy conversation based stories, and this one really scratches that itch. Also the little sketch feature was a fun detail.
I read the first update on desktop, but I read the rest on mobile and it seemed to work fine unless there was something I unknowingly missed.
If I were to summarize my feelings at the end, it would be that meme picture of the cat looking at the phone with tear filled eyes. In all, Bow/Arrow was a delight to read, thanks for making it!
Thanks so much for reading and for your comment! :) I'm glad it was still readable on mobile. My main concern with that was that I used a silly method to make the "AM:" and "KC:" tags on each message be smaller than the message text, which didn't scale the way I wanted on mobile. Not in a way that BROKE anything per se, I just didn't like the look of it.
Thanks for sticking with the story from beginning to end ~
REALLY fantastic writing! the sort of twisty thought experiment that I love in scifi. Greatly enjoyed Mathis's militant optimism.
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!
That was great. I found the mystery intriguing and became a big fan of Mathis.
Thank you for reading! :)
dangit now I need to know what happens next.
...and now I know. Worth waiting for.
Thanks for reading!